Advertising our Trinket Boxes!
We spent the day yesterday advertising our product! The first part of the morning we watched a clip from dragons dens and had a go and writing our own pitch! We then concentrated on writing up our advert! We looked at script writing and other adverts from the television to inspire our own ideas! We also linked it to our literacy work from last week and included our persuasive and rhetorical devices, like rhetorical questions, alliteration and the rule of '3', to help make our adverts as persuasive as possible!
Emma and Chloe's advert:
Chloe: It's magical
Emma: It's marvellous
Chloe and Emma: It's a miracle!
Emma: How badly do you need some more storage in your bedroom? Well we have the most magical memory boxes just for you.
Chloe: Have you decided what to get your marvellous mother for mothers day? Well worry no more, we have the perfect gift!
Emma: Can you remember ALL of your holidays, special days out and Birthdays? Well now you can, with its luxury padded lining you can rest assure that through think and thin all of your precious memories will stay safe! They're funky! They're fun! They're fabulous!
Chloe: Buy one now while stocks last for an amazing 80p! What a bargain for these magical, hand crafted boxes!