Friday, 1 March 2013

During our starters in literacy we have been writing descriptions for settings.

Here is Emma's description for a lake in a woodland...

'In the luscious wood the trees were as tall as the highest mountain (rustling in the gentle breeze) and sparkling in the sunlight, in the middle of the wood, was a glistening deep blue lake. Softly, the autumn leaves floated onto the ground. In the bushes, a faint sound of animals echoed.'

Well done Emma!

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